Jalonso meant "Nice effort, too bad...." yeah, it does seem like the purple hollogram out of his watch is just another layer with lowered opacity but it looks good, I think. It needs a bit more AA in some places, but overall it looks good.
I saw the show twice, i think, and I agree with happip lol, it's waay cheesy
its ok something is missing in the lineart i cant put my finger on it